interesting, this would be pretty repetative if you went along with the atbg storyline but if you went into her past it should be a really good story.

This was good. I never really connected with Sedra as much as I would have liked to but this was still a good chapter. I will always enjoy reading about the thoughts of the ATBG characters because they are all so real.

Hi,I love your story. I love Sedra and can't wait for you to update, if you ever do. Also, I love your writing style.

Sarah called Sedra, hmm? ^.~

I knew I loved Sedra. I can't wait to see more of this. I'm absolutely sure it's going to ring some bells with Velita. ^-^

Kepp it up, hon'!

~ Moriah

This story is very intresting so far, i'm not really into the whole yaoi thing i don't mind yuri though :P which because your characters aren't all stiff straight people and the mystery behind the main character you've given just enough information to catch somebody's intrest, though you might want to work on keeping that person's intrest. The way your character is talking about one thing and then skirting to something else and changing topics quickly again is a bit confusing. Good luck on future chapters!^.^