Reviews for The Students of Ehre

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Goddess of the writings 2007-03-22 ch 1,	abuseI'm really enjoying this story. Keep up the good work. There were some minor corrections, but I forgot where, so just look it over again.
Kyandoru 2004-07-31 ch 8,	abusethis is an interesting story descriptions and characters are good but you need to have more of a plot update soon i look forward to it ja ne
Sunflower Sarah 2004-06-21 ch 8,	abusecool story
Darkness Shadowed 2003-12-16 ch 8,	abuseBut is that the right response? I do not think so for some reason. - Stevie
PANDORA 2003-07-24 ch 8, anon.	abuseYAY! YOU FINALLY POSTED YOUR LASTEST. IT WAS NOT ENOUGH THOUGH. I WANT MORE. YOU HURRY THROUGH YOUR STORY SO FAST, MORE DETAIL, MORE EVERYTHING. AND YOU'RE SUCH A TEASE, YOU THROW A LITTLE MYSTERY INTO EVERY CHAPTER TILL WE ARE CHOMPING AT THE BIT TO GET ANSWERS. THIS IS GOOD, BUT TOO MUCH OF A GOOD THING CAN GO BAD. MORE! MORE! MORE!
Mitchelmoo 2003-07-20 ch 8,	abuseYour doing a great job, really. My only complaint is that the story line seems to be moving too fast. I don't know who half the people are in the story because they've only been introduced once very quickly in one chapter. Also, not much seems to take place in each chapter. As Always, IXOYE
Azkavioa 2003-07-20 ch 8, anon.	abuseI love this. There are a lot of stories about 'magic school' around, but this is really enjoyable to read. And eeh, Dahni sounds creepy. ¬Azka
Erinamation-limited2-nothin... 2003-07-20 ch 8,	abuseweird school I mean UNIVERSITY
Orion Phoenix 2003-07-20 ch 8,	abuseAll I can say is keep going. You have a great story here, and I'm looking forward to future chapters. Phoenix
Erinamation-limited2-nothin... 2003-07-19 ch 7,	abusehm
meaningless 2003-07-19 ch 7,	abusefinally another update, although to my disappointment,it was pretty short...oh well, keep updating! not luv triangles, luv squares-Meaningless
PANDORA 2003-07-15 ch 6, anon.	abuseCOME ON! COME ON! Where's the next chapter!?! ok, so, yes, the idea is not an original one yet, big deal. it's what you do with that idea that counts. and so far you're doing great. i mean you've got me hooked and waiting for the next chapter. one thing i would like to see you do though, is become more descriptive. use your senses and become more aware of the world around you. how does the place smell? is it quiet or noisey? how does it feel, cool, dry,damp, warm and cozy? and more visual detail desribe her room or dorm area. don't just tell us a story, although you are good at that, but paint us a picture as well. looking forward to your next chapter. thank you.
MikaQ 2003-07-13 ch 6,	abuseoh...those students are NASTY! I definetly don't like Raehyn, not after what Ehre said about him, nor Anaeri. She seens like a bossy know-it-all. Maybe Gillna will be okay, but he didn't even spare the time to talk to her! Dahni...hoo boy, I feel a confrontation coming there. Caneh seems nice though...maybe Cassari's finally found a friend! (by the way, her statement about her being in shock...if she rally was in shock, she probably ouldn't have said that. I would say something like, "sorry if I seem ungrateful, I really am thankful, or something of the like. But that's just me ^^)
Darkness Shadowed 2003-07-12 ch 6,	abusePoor dear, it must be aweful to be so shy. Oh well. I wouldn't rally know though, I've never been shy. Oh well. It's a great story. ~ Stevie
meaningless 2003-07-12 ch 6,	abuseaw...now i feel sry for her. You know the best thing to do in a situation like this is to do something stupid then you'll stand out, then just sit back and relax as the people Pushing by each other to make friends with you!...what? Isnt that what your supposed to do? well anyways GJ not luv triangles, luv squares-Meaningless

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