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Reviews For: Donny's Demons
IrishVampire13 2003-07-11 . chapter 1
*gulps* Very creepy. Good job, here.
The Shady Crew 2003-07-07 . chapter 1
Good stuff so far, :) Can't wait for more!

- Master Elf
penster 2003-07-06 . chapter 1
Not bad. I like it! It's a keeper!
Jun Ying 2003-07-06 . chapter 1
Your story, personally, is advancing a tat too quickly. You shud put more attention into story building...etc..
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