hey!so u are kristy's brother jacob?i'm one of her friends from school.i love ur 's REALLY good!

Hey! This is me...anyway. I love this poem, glad you told me to read...it makes me wonder... *sigh* nevermind, I shalln't let my mind wander...lol.

Yabou SL

Extremely powerful. The rhyme was practical and didn't hinder the poem at all, and the ending was a sharp stab to my stomach. Excellent work.

Pretty powerful. Good all around! I liked the portrayal of emotions.

-Remm

wonderful poem. it brought tears to my eyes.

I could clearly feel your pain in this poem. Very graphic descriptions.

i loved it it was powerful and it captured me the ending was bittersweet.

Hey I really liked this poem it was awesome. So I was just wondering is this how you really feel about Jeff? So ttyl buh bye!

This was really powerful.

Heart of the Sword

Wow, nice job! Good job on the rhyming.

Wow. You captured the emotions so well and then end was so unexpected. Luved it. Great job!

SpiLLeD InK

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