|Reviews for Pain|
| krisitn 5/17/05 . chapter 1
hey!so u are kristy's brother jacob?i'm one of her friends from school.i love ur 's REALLY good!
| sleah 9/30/03 . chapter 1
Hey! This is me...anyway. I love this poem, glad you told me to read...it makes me wonder... *sigh* nevermind, I shalln't let my mind wander...lol.
| Shalott13 7/17/03 . chapter 1
Extremely powerful. The rhyme was practical and didn't hinder the poem at all, and the ending was a sharp stab to my stomach. Excellent work.
| Remm Farr 7/12/03 . chapter 1
Pretty powerful. Good all around! I liked the portrayal of emotions.
| CASSIEgrl32 7/12/03 . chapter 1
wonderful poem. it brought tears to my eyes.
| Mae 7/12/03 . chapter 1
I could clearly feel your pain in this poem. Very graphic descriptions.
| eliza 7/10/03 . chapter 1
i loved it it was powerful and it captured me the ending was bittersweet.
| Sam 7/9/03 . chapter 1
Hey I really liked this poem it was awesome. So I was just wondering is this how you really feel about Jeff? So ttyl buh bye!
| Keep it 100 7/7/03 . chapter 1
This was really powerful.
Heart of the Sword
| Keeper of the Key 7/6/03 . chapter 1
Wow, nice job! Good job on the rhyming.
| SpilledInk 7/6/03 . chapter 1
Wow. You captured the emotions so well and then end was so unexpected. Luved it. Great job!
P.S. Could you check out my work if you get the chance? )