Seraph's back! Yay! :D
And he's got strange powers too - that's always a plus. I love how you've introduced all these mythical references and ideas and I wonder where this second case is going to go. Seems to be more supernatural than the first. I also like how Aeron and Seraph interact so please write more soon!

Ah ... another well-written chapter. I really like this story. And an appearance from Seraph. I was surprised the last chapter when the girl was hit ... I hope she's going to be ok. But anyway, good job, and I'm looking forward to the next chapter.


[pali-chan]

Nice, very nice. As always! The story's just getting good. One question. Are these completely different "episodes" with no connection to each other or are they all part of some greater scheme?

Please continue!

~Sindu~

OH. I'm the first to review! xD. Am I not?

Sugoi chapter nyaa! Aeron sounds like my kind of guy. Seraph is uberly mysterious, x 10. He can GLOW? What kind of freaking person is he!?

I love this case, though the title reminds me of Noah's Ark. The whole religion issue that you explored in the case is a little frightening to me. *shudders*

Anyway, I hope to see more of your chapters nyaa! xD. *hugs*

i love the names u used in this...especially Seraph...
really good story!! im gonna have 2 try to rite one now, but im a poet chick so its hard...
oh well, thanks 4 the inspiration!! :D
ur on my fav story list BTW.

this is entirely too good. go away, sue. haha. you're demoralising us aspiring writers out here.
you're good at writing mystery! and this mystery reminds me of one story in rk. nyaa, the one where ... ok. nvm. if i see you online i'll tell you. ^^;;
its so good. write more! upload more! i can't wait.
-MiNt* ^^

Hey it's me again! That was awesome! A great beginning to a new case. The painting thing was really cool, btw. Like the fact that only Aeron could see it. Keep writing!

Oh and where's the side chapter?

~Sindu~

P.S. My re-write of the Demon's Blade is up, so if you wanna read it (and I hope you do), then go ahead. ^^

No! That chapter ended so horribly! Why did the little girl have to get crushed by the car? I felt so sorry when she told the story about her brother. It almost made me strike a tear. This is SUCH a good story. Come out with more soon ...

PS. I wanna be your friend! But I don't have livejournal. How do you get one?

[pali-chan]

Glad to see you're back! And now I'm intrigued again. Aeron's definetely growing on me as a character and you had to end it on a cliffhanger, didn't you? Oh well, you know it'll bring me back.

What happened to Seraph? (I can't remember ^_^;;) Anyway, another case, more mystery and confusion. Update soon!

Hm... I had a much longer review than that. Oh well. As people have already told you, Raygun as murderer was completely surprising. But what was the deal with the ripped yellow moon thingy? I mean, I don't think it ever got explained what it was doing there at the crime scene. But maybe it will be soon. Seraph seems interesting... short for Seraphim, maybe? Or even the direct translation of "to burn". I don't know. He's just a really cool character, I think. I'm into the whole religious symbolism in stories thing so I find this really cool.

Aeron is simply yummy, but so is Seraph. Hmm... what is this wish of his? I think I may have a sliver of an idea, but I can't wait to find out if I'm right or not. ^^

By the way, thanks for reviewing The Demon's Blade. Though if you haven't read the other chapters, don't. Cuz just recently it got a major rewrite/revise. I just haven't posted it up yet. I really did a lot more justice to my characters this time around, so I hope you'll wait on reading the rest of my story and I hope even more that you'll read it when I do get my lazy butt in gear and update. ^^

~Sindu~

Wow! Another amazing and well-written story. This one even more so than your others. Even better than Steal Me Away. And that's saying something. Can't wait!

~Sindu~

P.S. Don't forget to update Steal Me Away!

Sorry I haven't reviewed your other chapters, been sick in the hospital! I love what you have created in this story! Raygun's (!) id as the murderer was a surprise! I thought it was Seraph and Aeron was just being a fat-head! Great job! Looking forward to your next story...

Oh my ... I did think it was Seraph ... but I was thinking there might be someone else, too. But Raygun? That came out of nowhere. I really can't wait to read Case 2. Come out with it soon!


Pali-chan

gah! you GOT me! I thought it might have been Seraph too! You never suspect those secondary characters...can't trust 'em for one second... *grumble grumble*

At any rate: excellent job, and I look forward to Aeron-keiji's next case!

Oh wow, I didn't think of Raygun. I thought that it was too obvious to be Seraph (but then again, it would have been interesting if it WAS him) But I like that it wasn't - I wanna know more about Seraph and if you do that in the next part then I'll have to read that too! Not that I wouldn't have anyway ^_^ Glad that the mystery's cleared up, suspense kills me