It seems as if it is in all of us, it has a magical, mysterious undertone running beneath the ever so slightly confusing body. I like it that way, keep us wondering and keep us enjoying. Very nice!
Starlight Maiden
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What a wonderful poem! It was descriptive, yet not too wordy. It got a little confusing towards the middle, but clarified itself at the end. Really nice work! I can't wait to read more!

p.s. check out some of my work sometime!