 A. Barone 2004-07-19 . chapter 8really cool story, should get this and the first one published, after some editing of course |
 Peregrine Psyche 2004-06-24 . chapter 8Wow... stupid me for not checking to see if you had written a sequal to TCEIS. I was so surprised to see the email from you in my inbox that suddenly I'm like "Oh I remember that story! I loved it!" Then I had to search for your penname and then I started reading this one and I loved this one too. It's wonderful. I just think it was so well written and I like how you write it. Please keep this up... and I'm adding you to my fave author's list so I don't lose your pen name again. |
 F. Teague 2004-01-01 . chapter 8Wowow... ! ... ! ... *erupts into clapping, whistling, cheering, hooting, etc. etc. etc. etc.* FABULOUS! Absoballyutely satisfying and appropriate ending... Oh my good Lord! And the best part is, you actually //finished// it, something so many authors seem unable to do (up to and including meself *guilty shine*). Well, I'm off *salutes* |
 F. Teague 2004-01-01 . chapter 7Ahaha...I must review before going on to the last chapter. Is it the last chapter? I shall see... ^_~ |
 F. Teague 2003-12-30 . chapter 3Lovely, lovely... just lovely... *murmurs dreamily and wanders off into some dark corner* |
 F. Teague 2003-12-30 . chapter 1Oh Lordy //wow// Maginificent chapter, maginificent writing... Onward! |
 Aimee Raven 2003-12-07 . chapter 8Hiya! Hey this is so cool! I;m so glad now I've finished it to look back at all I've read...its so awesome, and I love the wya its worked out! Simply brilliant! Love,Mia |
 Aimee Raven 2003-12-07 . chapter 7Hiya...omg this is so brilliant...like truly awesome! I love this..like an amazing story..really fabulous..congrats! Love, mIA |
 Aimee Raven 2003-12-07 . chapter 6Hiya...oh god...this is so cool..I can;t wait to see whats going on..I love Takeis. Love,Mia |
 Aimee Raven 2003-12-06 . chapter 5Oh...wats gona happen? Must read more! Love, Mia |
 Aimee Raven 2003-12-06 . chapter 4Hiya! oh..this..is weird..i dont tihnk the police woulda let her go but its coll! Love, mia |
 Aimee Raven 2003-12-06 . chapter 3Hi...oh...dear..wats going on> isnt tom weird? I mean supposing she in lov with him? Weird, lol. lvoe this story..cant wait to finsih it! Love,Mia |
 Aimee Raven 2003-12-06 . chapter 2Hiya! Cool!Seriously I am totally intrigued now, off to read more, great story! lveo, Mia |
 Aimee Raven 2003-12-04 . chapter 1Hiya! Me again! I'm sick so you'll forgive me if I can't read the rest today...yikes! Some dilemma! Very intrigued now...can't wait to read the rest. How are you? Love, Mia |
 UK-meets-USA 2003-09-29 . chapter 8Hi this is Bob n Kazzi on my joined account with Ishuzu, come check out our collab story. |