  Lauren Didi 2005-01-03 . chapter 5 Holy crap - you didn't tell me you wrote more of this! Wow, you must have really had a lot of time on your hands...
I like the yellow El Camino! Nice touch! (and yes, I'm in the library at school right now during sucky 11th pd...hee hee hee)
Lots of Love,Lauren |
  forever fallen 2003-07-31 . chapter 4:claps: Youve got this one flowing really good. Congratz. I like the way you have them think, its really intresting. i like this alot. You need to keep this going, k? |
 Laurie-the-Duck 2003-07-20 . chapter 4the olive branch...nice idea. i do think liv blew it a bit outa proportion, i mean, she can hang out with mack!! and its not sam or alex's fault...well, ok,. it is...idk, ok! good chapter tho. keep writing, since theres no band theres nothing else to do |
| Laurie-the-Duck 2003-07-16 . chapter 3 hey! great chappie! cant wait for more! |
| Kittty Pryde 2003-07-13 . chapter 2 QuasiAutobiographies are fun, this is super weird to read, cuz i think i know what's going to happen and it does!!
That doesnt make it bad at all, though. No grammar errors, good plot, unique charaters=good story! |
 Sapphire Jewel 2003-07-07 . chapter 2hm...next chapter? please? :D
It's not that bad, just check your spelling of "it's." Okay, later priya! |
| Laurie-the-Duck 2003-07-06 . chapter 1 The Three Musketeers? LOL LOL LOL. good story. i would really like to get to know these characters some more! |
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