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| kaika switched 2004-07-06 ch 1,   | I really like this...it's almost like you have to read it in a monotonous voice (or thought) because it's like the narrator has given up. Especially with the repeated line "He'd never listen anyway". The last stanza is just...depressing because it's like you can't help the kid. I loved it. Keep writing! |