wow, this is brilliant. It’s great how you capture the emotion and created into something dark and mysterious like a shadow. Your work is great, keep it up. Next time don’t put yourself down k. Again bravo.

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I'm reminded of another poem, "The days are cold, and dark, and dreary..." Anyway, back to your poem. It was well written, and yes very sad and depressing. Although I wouldn't call it dull. Great work.

~*~AbunaiChikara