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| Kenishiro 2004-01-31 ch 1,  | abusean excellent poem, i loved it.. |
| swirlygirl 2003-09-07 ch 1, | abusesuch imagery great work |
| teresa7 2003-07-11 ch 1, | abuseLOL i love car rides! they're so fun. i call em "road trips". anywho a nice piece. ~teresa~ |
| Keep it 100 2003-07-07 ch 1, | abuseOOh! Nice! ~Heart of the Sword |
| obsidian katana 2003-07-06 ch 1, | abusenice haiku. well described, though if my dad were driving our van, the ride wouldn't be so nice. nice comparison, i like that a lot. great job! keep on writing and posting more! btw, for some reason, i can't get to the other piece, Wind, that you posted. i'll see if it works later. |
| When 2003-07-06 ch 1, | abuseoh! i love it! and i love how you portrayed the road as a sperpent! Im adding this to mah favorites! |