again, all i can say is wow. you have amazing talent. the discussion at the end is wonderful... it fits perfectly. very very nice.

How sad, yet witty all the same. You're right about human nature. We're not very forgiving creatures. God, on the other hand, is the master of forgiveness. I cannot possibly count the number of times I have asked for forgiveness and He has granted it freely.

Clever way of expressing this.

thanks,
Lady E

Wow.. thanks for the review is your sn on aol?? my aol sn is simpleplan31... guys suck a lot.. this poem is very very good & funny if you know the story!

Sad, brilliant, very rich!! wow... amazing. I wish I could say more... but I'll leave it to you ;-)

This was a very lovely poem. Please excuse me for not being as excited as I was previously. You see, I am extrememly tired. In any case, this was a beautiful work!

~*~AbunaiChikara

Excellent. I loved the way you worded everything to convey your emotions. It was personal, and I thought that it was especially good that you didn't pick any particular ryhme scheme. Awesome work, Kim.

dang, that must have been a really nice guy.