a beautiful poem.

Auri

I just loved that! The language you use is absolutely stunning. The words flow easily, and I can see honesty in every word. This makes it easier for the poem to reach deep inside one's heart.

Beautiful. Simply beautiful.

this is kinda wierd, kinda scary, and very thoughtful

very poetic. I like the realism you employ by using such words as "baby". It makes the poem more identifable to your personal feelings and your persona. Good job!

I still haven't caught up on "Legally Binding." Ah, I'm conng have to get to that...

Anyway, pretty good song, kinda short, but not really... lol, yeah, I'm not making much sense today. I liked how you changed the chorous, and the last chorous was the best. Try and ch eck the rhythm with the first to, though. I really loved the first and third verses, though. Don't know why, but I did, heh. "When I told you I wanted to fly away/you laughed/(What a surprise)/When I told you I wanted to/die today/you smiled" Great job

~Jess

OOh, I liked this. Especially the ending. Made me shiver for some odd reason. Great job. ^^

Exremely well done.. Its not werid.. Its actually really nice.. The bracketed areas made me laugh.. (They tend to, I dont know why).. Very emotive well expressed.. The chorus was beautiful.. So was the ending.. I enjoyed it a lot.. The flow was good and the overall product was awesome.. Nice.. I enjoyed it..

beautiful, emotional, powerful, well done, keep it up!