On my life, I am not one of these people.

Hi, great poem
Yeah Vnomi is a girl. Why?

how long did it take you to write this?~ and just some simple critism, not to be obnoxious~ but it could've had better structure so it flowed easier and there was space to be articulate with~ I'm not saying you should take my advic. you may like it as is.

I've gone through this recently. It's so true. This is great. Described so well! :)

*sighs* Keep writing!
~Vnomi~

aw...another poem that i can relate to 100%. you're poems are fab!

~teresa~