Good! Now Ella Enchanted is added in the mix! Who were the enemy archers, orcs, ogres, or others? And did they kill the few remaining people (the gaurds)? And is the gate left open? did they walk in on the middle of a siege? it's good adn you write really well, but you nee dto explaina few details. You write short and sweet (GOOD) but almost too mucha dn you skim over so fast you skip some details. if you need a beta reader, i'm open! but it's very good and i like it!

~Kit ;)

It's, like, Lord of the Rings. >blink, blink< it's good, no question, but what's with the names and the parallel circumstances? But i do like it. A bit romancey but not so much. Did they sleep together or do more than that? or is it even nessacery in the story to know? but good! now i must go read the next chap.

~Kit ;)

I'm not sure if Glenn's mom is dead... From what I've read of your story with Vaughnn (sp), I think that she is dead... But then again, it'll be very twisted if she did ended up being dead.

=__=You sure that Glenn and Anwen just 'slept'...? ::imagines a ticked off Aragorn1 glaring at her::
DYOK, DYOK, DYOK! I'm joking! Anywho, the story is sweet... And talk about one event after another, ne? Hehheh.

You have a really good story coming along nicely here! :D Great job! ^_^ cant waite to read more!

~Nikki

Ohh... god! i like it! keep going, it almost sounds like the dragonlance saga but not quite. write soon!

~kit ;)

Nice prologue :D