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Tragedy is Love
2004-03-15
ch 15,
abusehey, that was so beautiful. i like how u ended it there, it's great.
i'll miss them and yes ... all that. but i'm pleased to have read it!
Angelgirlie805
2004-03-15
ch 15,
abuseOMG! I can't believe that it is over, anpther story I liked just ended today *sob* Whatever shall I do. Well yes anyway a very nice way to end it, she finally finds happiness and completeness (sp?)
I am so happy to have been here reading this for those 8 months and I am glad that I helped you with it. but THANK YOU! For writing such a great piece of work. I can't wait to see what you will come up with next.
I love this story and always will it was so funny, but at the same time very serious with real life situations that people could relate to. You are an amazing writer and I look forward to furture stories.
so until the next story (you had better right another one hehe) I say goodbye. MUCH LOVE and GREAT JOB! I hope that won't be my last time saying that to you. ^-^
decree of fate
2004-03-15
ch 15,
abuseyeah you did show more of the characters and really made them seem real...I really liked it...kinda sad it ended but it was great!! :)
NehemiaH
2004-02-21
ch 14,
abusejeez...you updated...TWICE...and i didn't notice till now...heh sorry about that! anyway, i love love love love this story, i really do. and the fact that it's almost over, does make me really sad. do you have another story started? heh anyway...great chapters...and i can't wait to see what happens to these two! heh
-julie
Chelwad
2004-02-21
ch 14,
abuseAhh, this is a really good story. I absolutely love Karen's attitude, i've burst out laughing more than once. I started reading this at 11 at night and had to stop at like 1 because my eyes wouldn't stay open XD It's depressing though that Thomas is going to move away, anyways, update soon!
decree of fate
2004-02-20
ch 14,
abusekind of can see the changes...i luv it! i luv karen and thomas...they're hilarious in the first chapters...i really like this chapter too...very intense toward the end! :)
Emily
2004-02-20
ch 14, anon.
abuseHORAY oh my god, I love this chapter! ITS SO FREAKING GOOD :D:D:D:D:D:D! Definitely my favorite so far :D:D! YAY GREAT JOB MEL :)
Tragedy is Love
2004-02-20
ch 14,
abusehey, that was good, but just one question - was there sort of a gap between this chapter and the last? i reread the last chapter and yeah. nayway, i got the gist and i love you
Angelgirlie805
2004-02-20
ch 14,
abuseAW so cute! I really liked this chapter so sweet. At first I was like aaw poor Thomas but now its sweet. finally Karen is letting go of her walls its nice. Anyway yeah Korean Soap Operas huh, you freak lol jk. Well I know that this is short but I have to finish getting ready for school so I'll see you at the next chapter which I hope that you will get out soon ~_^. Bye bye much love and GREAT JOB! of course ^-^
decree of fate
2004-02-18
ch 13,
abuse:) luv ur story & the characters!
emilyyy
2004-02-16
ch 13, anon.
abusehello melody dearest! i like this chapter :D. i like the changes. AH, thomas dont leave! :(. anyways, i'm feeling out of it so i probably wont write very much. but yes, great chapter :D. ice skating was fun. i didnt fall. yay! have a great break and i'll probably talk to you tomorrow! byebye!
Angelgirlie805
2004-02-15
ch 13,
abuseOMG! Missy it has been way to long since your last update! Well yeah OMG! again He finally said it oh oh oh he can't just leave she has to say something, I'm dying with anticipation here so you had better get the next chapter out soon. HHM funny how all the story's I am reading are talking about people moving and so am I, I'm only moving like 2 mins away though but it sucks cause it is a smaller house and my stuff won't fit in my room and I just finished decorating it *sob* the horror. Yeah anyway not much else happening cept my dad quit drinking, I'm being supportive but not letting my guard down, I feel that is the best thing to do. Well yeah great chapter I can't wait for the next one and this time it had better not take you months to get it out you hear me! OH! and I don't have any suggestions for another story but I'm sure that whatever you choose will be great just as long as the characters in the story don't start out all lovey dovey that is just so annoying and no fun hehe. Well yeah that is all since this is a really long review. I'll see you at the next chapter bye bye and much love GREAT JOB! as always ^_^
Sry if I have typos but its kinda late and I'm out of it ^-^
decree of fate
2004-01-25
ch 1,
abusegreat! :) update soon!
JazzeeT
2003-12-02
ch 12,
abusek.. now im all caught up... good chap..
JazzeeT
2003-12-02
ch 11,
abuseurmm hmm thats an interesting discovery..
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