Simply lovely haiku. I really liked it too. Excellent work.
*AbunaiChikara
Ps. Thank you so much for reviewing "The Piano". It was very much appreciated.

I think the title had a lot to do with the effect of the poem, I must admit. Anyway, that was good stuff.

This is a wonderful haiku - a beautiful image. Thanks for reviewing my piece, too! You're going on my fave authors list :-)

Wow this is awesome! And very hard to understand, too. Loved it!

cio, hoellenwauwau

Awesome haiku! You're really good at this... keep it up!

such a beautiful image... love the title! awesome work.

That is such a sweet image. Many people relate doves to purity, so everyone should be able to get this.

Heart of the Sword

I only wish I could write half as well as you. How beautiful...