I liked that. You expressed everything wonderfully and you can tell a lot of emotion went into it. the only problem was i think you had some rhyme scheme problems, but it was a lovelt piece all the same.

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Good poem. You express the emotions and everything perfectly. The only thing I could find wrong with it was the rhyming...the rhyme scheme changed halfway through the poem.

Other than that, good job!
~*Tigress Moon