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| Densetsu (too lazy to login... 2003-07-29 ch 1, anon. | abuseImpressive also, but you could do with a few more synonyms for some words. I'd noticed slight repetition of the same adjectives - nothing terrible, but it's a factor that could be improved upon. ~ Moriah |