Very good poem. I've never really read much to do with the Camelot legend, but this was really drew me in. I think it was the mystical atmosphere. And the repetition of "the fire burning". Keep writing :)
*cosmo-queen*

I dont mormally like Arthurian stuff, but this was very well written. i loved the story it told, and especially the first and last lines. well done, a very good poem.

do something about the layout!