This poem is so good! Gosh, I can't get over what a good writer you are. Your words flow in such a unique way. I'm sorry my review for the other poem, Me Lucky Charms, wasn't that long, but I had to get off the computer. But I wanted to come back and read more of your work and tell you how much I love it.

This was a really good poem, and I really liked the way you broke it up into equal stanzas that kept the rhythm of the rhymes. It was also a very creative piece, something different to write about.

Though I still must say, Me Lucky Charms hit me in the heart-that was such an awesome poem, I can't get over it. Again, whoever recieved it was extremely lucky-I have an Irish boyfriend, why can't he write ME a poem like that, huh? lol I know why-only a few special people are blessed with the talent of amazing writing.

Wonderful poems!

Rock on,

Beau Coeur

these are the kinds of things He does for us. good description. keep writing.

Great work! Faith always triumphs.

Hey! I really enjoyed this poem. It was really creative and it had a good flow to it. So keep up the good work.