Ah! A 7-5-3-1 haiku, right? I like it.

I do like the line This molten liquid

But this poem really makes me frown. Ask me not why, but yet I feel, there is just something which I do not really like. Perhaps it is that I hardly read haikus. Somehow somehow, I just feel something is wrong about it.

..Perhaps it is the way I intrepet it..

good job it is a lovely image and i have always had a thing for poems writen about the elements u have a great way with words

Cool. I liked the "molten liquid" part. Nice touch.


~Heart of the Sword

Summer storms. We've been getting a bunch of those lately. Nice work.


~Heart of the Sword

AMAZING! I love these, excellent work!

This is a very good haiku. Very strong words. :)

And thank you for commenting on my poem; I'm very sorry about the disappearance of Princess Mulan.. I haven't personally read any of her work, but I do plan to. I hope you gather enough money to find her..

Good luck.

nice...great writing..keep posting!

I loved the imagery! All the haiku you wrote were excellent! Do write more.

*sighs* I wish there would be cool breezes here... A very descriptive poem, by the way!

~ CoolBEans18s

An amazing description! These are great!!

~ CoolBeans18s

great piece! paints a serene picture in my mind. awesome job! keep up your writing!

great cut haiku! well written, nice personification of fire. i like this a lot. great job!

Great haiku! but I wish I could read more of your stuff, I'm at a cyber cafe now.

It's incredible...!