A cliffhanger. Pretty good chapter. For a second I thought Cirien was a goner.

Wishing You Good Health And Plenty Of Wealth, SirScott

decent chapter. maybe it's just me or not but wendel's mother seemd to let him go off rather quickly and with little to no fight to stop him. and the woman can see auras? you'll probably make a reason for a later installment. am glad to see you're still writing and i apologize for not being in contact as much as i use to. will try to remedy that.

My only suggestion is to rethink how Cirien got the mother to agree to send her offspring with a stranger that had a reputation given to her by almost the entire village of being a troublemaker. I don't think the mother would have changed her mind so easily to let the boy go with Cirien.

Other than that, this was a great chapter. It was definately a high-tempo, thriller-type of chapter... which is my favorite kind! Besides, her thoughts about kids made me laugh. She's definately not the children type of woman. *laughs* Anyways, I enjoyed reading this chapter and am looking forward to the next one. Well done and keep up the great work!

Daphne

Hmm...interesting chapter. I didn't think it was possible to respect Cirien more than I did already, but after what she did for Calso, I think it's definately a possibility. Anyways, great work and I hope to see more soon.
Daphne

Cirien just can't get a break can she. was short but good, need more meat though. and no pressure regarding the river at all.

Hey! Omg finally an update! I love this story...it's so...magic :). Lmao...healer Aimee Raven? I'm chuffed...thanks :D! That's really cute...Will Calso be ok? *worries* Update soon...please...this chapter was too short and curse those stupid villagers! Love, Mia
PS: I haven't had net for over a month so sry if I didn't review sooner and haven't replied to your e-mail yet!

Intriguing...I wonder if Cirien gets Infected, too. Anyway, I really love this story. I'm adding it to my Fav. Stories List. Awesom, awesome work so far. Please update soon! :o) Thankies.

OMG how weird. Please tell me she doesn't take his hand. Please? HE'S DEAD FOR CRYING OUT LOUD.

Yeah, I can see why I should start hating Cirien now. That was pretty low to do that to Calso. I still don't really hate her, though...I just have less respect for her. *shrugs* I'm strange...

Hm, interesting...a professional thief. I never would have guessed that lol. Great job so far! :o) I'm so addicted to this story. I'm still rooting for Julius, though...please don't hate me!

Aw...I feel so sorry for Cirien. I agree with Calso about it not really bein Julius's fault, though. *pauses* But then again, I'm kinda biased. I like Julius for some unkown reason. *shrugs* Great chappie, though.

LMAO I'm sorry...but your little blurb at the bottom just cracks me up. *laughs again* Don't ask me why it's so funny to me...it just is.
*laughter begins to die down after a few minutes* Great chapter, by the way. I really like Calso. I espeically liked her line:
“Well, wasn’t that fun?” Calso said sarcastically, but cheerfully. “I guess that’s what got the other things in here. That was a damn smart snake, wasn’t it?”
Anyway, great job so far! Well, I'm off to read the next chapter...

Haha Spiffy. They got whooped by a girl. Yayzer! ;) lol
Hm, I wonder if the girl with the Cat's Claws is Arlene. Probably not, but that would be kinda cool.
Anyway, great chapter. I really like where this story is going!

Great chapter :o) I dunno why...but I kinda like Julius. *shrugs* Maybe it's the whole black thing...who knows. Anyway, this was really good. I'm kinda curious as to what she does that's so evil...hmm. Well, I guess I could alays read on and find out. LOL

Interesting development. Now I need to know more about the past and how her brother died.
Just don't add author's notes inside the story. It puts the reader off.