This is an awesome piece of writing. I love the imagery and the mysteriousness right up until the end!

I like! Really good n descriptive, i liked the whole mysterious thing going on until the end. And Im just in love with Chimera as well, thurt I'd let cha know. lol, its a great story!

Very interesting. The poetic feel is in keeping with your usual flare. The ending was definitely not what I expected. I thinking more along the lines of the piece about Her Rose that you have posted under Uniques on Fires of Flowers. Rgrettably the name has slipped my mind.

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Good. Very poetical, as is usual for you. Good flow, nice word choice. Altogether wonderful. _ I would say keep writing, but I know you wouldn't stop anyway.