Reviews for Illusions of a Simple Smile

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Cute Little Mongoose 2004-07-09 ch 4,	abuseah..i likey the kitty and i really really want to know what happens next so..PLEASE..PLEASE.. update soon!! ^.^
Cute Little Mongoose 2004-07-09 ch 3,	abusei love kittys. kittys rock! HAHAHAHAH!! and i'd like to thimk of justin timberlake as the devil. i don't really like him.. ^.^
Cute Little Mongoose 2004-07-09 ch 1,	abuseWOW..so pritty!! i like the story all ready. yup..yup!! ^.^
em 2003-11-30 ch 4, anon.	abuseglomps Kiyo... grabs Tao as an after thought You've made every character in this thing freaking hot~. How am I suppose to decide which I shall kidnap first? blinks Anyway I have no idea what the heck you're planning to do to poor Kai, so update once your brain has stopped melting down. As for couplings thinks (rare thing) I like KaixKorin or KaixJenji. Then again you'll probably throw more hotties at us won't you?
Germaine Amundsen 2003-10-20 ch 4,	abuseWha-oh! Well, this is shaping up to be ~awesome~! Well, any story with AFI songs for chapter titles would have to be... sniffles They had a concert last night, but I couldn't go... it sold out too fast... pout At least I got to see them back in April! ANYWAY! About your story- I abso-**-lutely love it! So, I'm really looking forward to the next chapter... (hint hint) Heheheheh... Squee!
Maykuu 2003-10-14 ch 4, anon.	abuseI like this story so far ^-^ It's kinda perverted... but it fits in a sweet way o.O You have a very nice style, very clean cut and holding great immagry. The one thing i think that needs to happen though, is that the whole thing needs to be expanded a bit, there is too much content for the small bit you write {and no, of course I'm not saying this because I'm thirsty for your style and want to read more of it, I'm not greedy, I'd never do a thing like that! -shifty eyes-}. Well I must go now, the hour is late and I have to write a sonnet before bed for school -.- well, oyaho suminasai {ignore my spelling please}, ja ne!
Dae Winter 2003-09-17 ch 4,	abuseI hate it when great authors critise themselves! lol This is a VERY sultry sexy piece!! I cant wait to read more! Keep up the great work!! David ^_^
The Chuckly Goth 2003-08-28 ch 1, anon.	abuseHey there, Adrian! ^-^ 'TIs I, the Chuckly Goth! Whoo! I just ahve to say that I love your prose... the narrative is flowing and easy to read, but it's interesting... not to mention the masterful addition of a green-haired naked man... haha. I also think that your naming all of the chapters after songs was clever... teehee... ^-^ Well, that's all for now. I'll prolly end up submitting another review in about ten minutes... @.@ Heh heh... Much luff, Der Chuckly Goth
NotEnough 2003-08-04 ch 4,	abuseWhat are t hey going to do to him? I DEMAND an answer. NOW! A pleasure slave? LOL, well, i guess it's better than killing people, though it does depend on whom you must pleasure huh. hehe. Update. SOON. I.e NOW.
Rikki Hyperion 2003-08-04 ch 4,	abuseKiyoshi won my heart with one line. "I’ll assume you know him, one fine piece of ** don’t you think?” I could have DIED laughing. That made my day. XDD As for the couples... Kai x Korin sounds romantic...but the fiend in me is saying Kai x Raven, or worse, Kai x Hisaki (oh no! @_@ hisaki would devour him! gasp) Expect some fanart...sometime this year. [I tend to procrastinate] There's too many good possibilities to pass up. ^_^
WitchesRaven 2003-07-29 ch 4,	abusesmiles and shakes his head You can't let your brain go into melt down just when it's getting good Kitten. I'm very curious as to what is going to happen so you have to at LEAST put another chapter up then I will threaten you on that ones review and you'll eventually get through it with the help of all my threats. smiles No go and write more.
Prelude to Decay 2003-07-29 ch 4,	abuseYeah, yeah, you better be ' sorry. =P I like Jenji... But I WILL complain and whine and whine about the lack of longness. ;_; ... And then I will hand you pocky. Gives pocky =D Strawberry. I don't mean to be rude (and it isn't really rudeness), but all the author notes disturb people from readin', usually. Of course, I couldn't agree more with your gawking.. =D Just maybe you could make them footnotes or something, I dunno. And all that from a simple smile. Gods, I love it. ^^ You're pretty good at describing how people look, and stuffs. You don't tell too much of the plot! Whine** But I suppose that keeps us readers motivated to read. And stuff. ^^ Looking forward to your next chapter. And don't worry too much about how long it takes to update, really. I'm much worse than you. ^_~ We readers're just happy for the new chapter.
Jiro 2003-07-28 ch 4, anon.	abuseKai x Korin (at least I hope ^_-)
NotEnough 2003-07-20 ch 3,	abuseWell, i want it to be Korin because he seems decent. I don't like Raven, he seems like an arse. I've only just met Kiyoshi dammit... Well, yes, i don't actually think he'll et with anyone at the moment you're not giving any hints dammit. Well, update soon. This just gets weirder. :D.
Prelude to Decay 2003-07-19 ch 3,	abuseI dunno if you quite got seductive, but I think so. =D I'm not gonna say who I think he'll turn up with, because I can't really be too sure. 'course, if you yourself couldn't decide, you could always throw in a little of everything. ^_~ You know, to please 'em all. I'm curious about Nightshade. And I wonder what poor Kai's boss will think when he doesn't show up? ;; I really like this so far~~ I really hope you continue it. There was like, one or two mistakes I could find in this whole story so far, so I hand you a COOKIE for that. And I glomp you. Glomps =D I can hardly wait for the next chapter. And humor is good, even in a serious situation... >D Cough Must..think..unperverted..thoughts. T_T ...Giggle

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