now this is what I call a horror poem. thank you for bring the fear back to the readers.

Well, Mr. Myers, seems you got something going here. Honestly, I saw the name of this on your profile and was kinda worried about clicking on it. So, four days later, I do so! Good job! Very morbid... like my stuff!

wow...um...nice? lo liked this poem. its written in a different format then you usually write in, but it works. u should read my poem "sisterly"...you'll find some similarities in these two poems...:/

ah! get away! *gets out a knife backing away* this has nice repetition. k-keep writing0) *shivers* *runs away*

very angry. i kinda like the repititions, they make it heavier and bring home what you say in between. its a bit disturbing, but hey, still good poem. well done, i suppose!

cheers

This is intense. I like it. The repetition provides the reader with a nostaligic feelings. Nice.