fascinating and sad... i better stop reading your poems (soon) for the night or i'll start crying! good work.

i can totally relate to this i wish i'm perfect genius...but then again,life is never may look perfect but who knows what this kind of people actually feel deep down inside?i think,everyone is envious towards each me for example,i always want to be like my twin or this friend of mine,but they wish they could be there.

I cant relate to this poem to...u think like me but you are so much better at pouring out your feelings.

thats acually quite good

Don'tcha just hate it? It's not fair! but more seriously, it's so true, wanting to be someone else because you hink it will make everything better . . .

You wrote this really well, it's really good!

Cool! Thanx for the review by the way ... you were right, it was love! :)

Blessed Be,

Andaren x

You got your feelings across very well.

Heart of the Sword

hey me again, this is another great poem! I can relate to this also! like there is this popular girl at school and she is a nice person but it comes easier 2 her than it does me...so ya u get the point. well again I say great poem!

-keep writing, your friend,

GoldMetalGymnast