Very interesting. I like your style of writing, the way you put insight into a lot of things. It makes for a good read, and makes me think a little about things that I normally wouldn't give a thought to.

you really got a ralen for writing. keep it up! and i truly adore this story. i'll keep it as one of my favorites! i luv you bie-bie

This sounds almost exactly like that Avril Lavigne song, "Sk8er Boi" with a tiny twist...

Wow, talk bout authuentic, yup, this is it! Real outta the ordinary...hm...it sounds like this is a true story, u wrote it real well! I love the idea and the ending of this story. Keep writing!
-Rhia