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| dreamwriter33 2008-08-01 ch 28,  | abuseGreat story. Very nicely done. |
| dreamwriter33 2008-08-01 ch 14, | abuseOMG! That was too good! I just can't believe they've been caught by grams and pops!...speechless. |
| Roman C Lee 2008-07-01 ch 9, | abuseWOOT! Freaking AWESOME!! lol, aw, why'd she have to run away? Zach is so sexy it's like . . . omg, *swoons* The way he talks about things, like why he finds virgins attractive, it's beutiful. And really hott, lol. It's midnight and I should go to bed but OMG how can I go to bed after reading that? I have to keep going! |
| Roman C Lee 2008-06-30 ch 4, | abuseOMG, she has mood swings. Like, one second she's all happy and nice and then she's YELLING, lol. That's crazy but really funny sometimes. I just feel sorry for those confused guys trying to keep up with her. |
| Roman C Lee 2008-06-30 ch 3, | abuseHaha, this is so fun! And YAY Zach has started to notice her! And so has this new guy, lol. |
| Roman C Lee 2008-06-30 ch 2, | abuseHahaha! *turns to Jade* You SO are falling for your step brother! Just admit it! It's hot! 8turns back to author* WOOT! This is freaking awesome! M, I think I used those same phrazes in my other review, lol, but 'awesome' and 'WOOT' are just things that pop up in my typing everywhere. lol, one look at his chiseled chest and she's head over heels *smirk* She was already kinda digging him before that, I bet. |
| Roman C Lee 2008-06-30 ch 1, | abuseO! This is awesome! Would you mind if I added this story to my C2? It's for family love that goes beyond normal 'family love'. I wanted to ask because I wasn't sure if authors would be, like, mad that their stories were being put into an incest C2. I wasn't sure if that would offend anyone. So is it alright? Great job with this first chapter! Dude, she really can take care of herself, and OMG he's hot, lol. I can't wait to keep reading! WOOT! |
| Hannah 2008-05-17 ch 21, anon. | abuseEW! GO AWAY JOSH! Nobody likes you so GO AWAY! |
| pheonixorion10 2008-05-15 ch 28, | abuseahh that was soo good and the proposal was so gosh darn cute woo sepuel! |
| imaRIOT 2008-01-06 ch 1, | abuseYay!:D |
| dreamcatcherxx 2007-12-18 ch 28, | abusei love it!! it's so romantic... *sighs* |
| chickflickjunkie 2007-08-24 ch 28, anon. | abuseoh my god! i loved this! it was just soo romantic and sweet at the end...yea i know i sound like a flake, but oh well..=D |
| Strangely Natural 2007-08-06 ch 28, | abusePrecious and cute with few but real tribulations, is there going to be a sequel? |
| outsidersgirl 2007-06-26 ch 28, | abusea good story |
| Mrs. MJackson 2007-05-14 ch 1, | abuseloving it so far, now i'm off to read the rest! |