I'm regressing back to my apathetic self to keep from getting stuck with Dustin. He's noticed that I don't seem as involved as I did in the beginning... I think I'm still me deep down, but I'm trying to hide it so maybe he'll back off...
Nice words, as usual.

Great poem, sad how the chick turned out though. Another good proseish thing from the Spiky Haired one . . . dude, your screen name is awesome . . .

Aww... That's sweet! Like another reviewer said, I'd do anything to have someone write something like that to me... Too bad she turned out to be a **! :(

Wut i would give for someone to write something like that for me...

In other words, i feel bad she became a heartless **, but i kina know how you feel (just vice versa...)

I know i have said this before but, you have great flow with words and sould become a song wirter...

MASTER A ELECTRIC GUITAR AND GRAB A BAND AND UR INVINCABLE!

aw. that's so cute. is this about Becky? just curious. hehe. Anywho, so cute...aww! That's all i can say. nice flow, sweet, nad not overdone!

"Day" gets a bit overused by the 4th stanza, but the second to last stanza is great. Keep it up!

hey this is really sweet. i'm not much for any type of love poetry, but sometimes i come across a good one or two...this is a good example of that ^^

well, its a bit different knowing shes a **. i'm sorry, sounds like you liked her a lot