how much sugar did she have? lol.

What's wrong with random dancing? Being hyper ROCKS! I'm hyper. My friends are hyper. Hyperness is cool.
BTW, this is a little confusing when you tell who's saying what. I think you mixed it up.

she's so cool she's high

Allison:I remembered that! That when Kelcey was was over! Wait! Duh. *Slaps self on head* Ow... Anyway that was great! I love... *falls on ground* *head throbbing*
Danielle:*walks in* Hit yourself in the head for saying something stupid again?
Allison: Yes...Ow.
Danielle: Yeah...you do that a lot.
Allison: Hey, ow, stop being, ow, so, ow, mean, ow.
Danielle: *copying* Okay, ow, i'll, ow, stop,ow.
Allison:Where did you, OW, get that! OW!
Danielle: You!
Allison:*in baby voice* Oh, I love you...OW!
Danielle: You scare me*Looks at Allison pitifully, shakes her head and walks away.
Allison: screams,"Then i guess my job here is done!"OW! OW! OW!

Aww. That's really cute! Great skit!
*lime-girl*

Whoa..it is so amaazing..it touches my heart..with its beuaty...(howevery you spell that...)

This was just the most enjoyable little skit. I felt like I was there. Very realistic. Very very entertaining. True to life - thanks!

It was okay, though slightly monotonous. But that's okay when the plot is suposed to be centered on a single event.

I liked the story. It's like stuff my friends and I would act out to. Cool

it was an ok story. i thought it was kind of boring.

I didn't feel like signing in. Well, this story has a good sense of humor, but the thing is that you don't really know who the people are. Besides that, it's very good! Would you review my stories too?