maybe its not funny, but it's beautifully poetic. well done.
>mysterykittyx

I agree with you. This isn't very humorous; it's more of a serious statement/thought. A good one, too.

Prettyful. It's true, 'tis. Although I don't get up early enough to hear the songbirds sing... Except for the really annoying sparrows that live outside my house, of course. Then, the whole thing is reversed. *shudder* ...

God's creation will always prevail out own. Lovely haiku.

That's a nice haiku. I think you're right. But I like music all the same.



~Duo Maxwell Is Mine No Touchy~

Very cute .. and very true as well :) Thanks for reviewing some of my poems.

lol, very good and well written, brilliant last line. lol.

True nothing compares to real thing! Excellent job!

Nice 'cut' poem! You (and your friend) are right! Very well put!

~ CoolBeans18s

It's not really in haiku form (I bet you you have at least one other person telling you this in your reviews already, but I have not read them yet so you get to hear it from me, too)

Haiku -

Three lines - the first and last being 5 syllables, and the middle being 7. Almost always about nature, in Japanese society, but people noawadays will write about anything in a haiku form (me included, lol).

Yeah...I like the premise of this, but your form was off. ^^; Unless this is a new form of haiku that I have never heard about, which I am doubting it is, lol.

Keep writing.

~Namir Swiftpaw

heh, cute, i like this. so true though, compared to the songs of birds, our artificial music is nothing. great job! keep on writing!

haha. This was really cute. I loved it! :)

*smiles* i love this kind of poety. It can touch even the hardest soul to make them think. :)
Thank you for the review


fare thee well

This one's pretty neat... I can tell what you mean through it. Good job!

hm mime...this one's a lil tricky;) great work!

~teresa~