 Frozen Soul 2003-07-20 . chapter 1Another good one. you have talent
~ Stevie |
 prettybrightlight 2003-07-14 . chapter 1I just wanted to thank you for your review of my song. I didn't have time to read all of your stuff but this one caught my eye and sure enough i liked it. |
 Whisperer in the Wind 2003-07-12 . chapter 1"Build up constellations of your own thoughts" This is my favorite line. It's so good! |
 Devin-Jamie 2003-07-12 . chapter 1i...it...uh...good...really good...great...awesome...and...uh...wow! Your really good, but i think you should put them all in one. If you do then every time you add a new one more people would see all of them. By the way, i now have five songs in the thing i have. I should be putting more up soon. |
 Seira 2003-07-11 . chapter 1This is really great...the words are beautiful and the message is so deep.
I esepcially liked the part with "Build up constellations of your own thoughts"...it was really great.
Please write more.
-Sam- |
 Risheath 2003-07-11 . chapter 1LOVE IT! Don't look at that damn picture...Your eyes'll fall out! I love your work and keep it going! |
 Dawn Proc 2003-07-11 . chapter 1i like it, generally. i think some of the wording is slightly confusing, but hey poetic license, so whatever you want. it's very sad. lots of death-ness. that's not a word but that's ok. but nice job.
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 lady passion 2003-07-11 . chapter 1it's wonderful. sometimes i wonder if you could also do an autobiography about me in one of ur poems. keep up the exellent work. |
 Anandria 2003-07-11 . chapter 1Wow, now that i've read yours, I think my stuff isn't worth anything. It's so deep, and meaningful. I love the way you word your writings, too. you're great! |
 Gary Borrows 2003-07-11 . chapter 1This is very good. One of my persoanly favourites of yours. The early verses/stanzas are superb. |
 ColorCrayons 2003-07-10 . chapter 1this one was one of my favs...it was really cool. i cant pick out my favorite stanza...it was all so...i dont know. i guess i could say beautiful, huh? anyway, i liked it, keep it up |
 Sunlit Rain 2003-07-09 . chapter 1Very interesting. Very deep and strong. Altogether beautiful. |