AS much poetry as it is a fic. Very good.

yeah, I've got one of those too! Though, I usually keep mine out of sight, and it's written in code too! No one's reading mine! Anyway, I agree with Friday Evening. All that over a little book! It's amazing, but stuff like that can happen in real life! The last line was good too! Kinda suspenseful there! Great work!

I liked this it was REALLY intense it was great bye bye MJB

I wanted to laugh after I read this. Don't take it personally- it's nothing like that at all. You just did a wonderful job creating a sense of internal conflict on the character just because of that little notebook! You worded everything nicely, it really set the mood right. I also wonder if there's going to be any more to this story? I agree with you that I think many of us have a little "purple notebook" of our own (I know I have one). Good job! Take care!

Oh are there gonna be more chapters?
I won't let my friends read out of my notebooks, that's for sure!