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| Katterree Fengari 2004-01-18 ch 1, | that's a bit confusing...because of the title, it makes me think the forest-child, is one of the seasons, or something, and the season is ending, and the speaker's trying to comfort the child saying that s/he won't ...age? -because the season comes again next year? But that doesn't explain why nothing dies in the mild forest... |
| Werecat99 2003-12-26 ch 1, | From the title I had expected something darker but that was surprisingly gentle. And I really like it. Good work. |
| The intellect 2003-10-17 ch 1, | this is amazing, u could of made it in too a double haiku me thinks! just briiliant describtion, lost 4 words! caz |
| cosmo-queen 2003-09-11 ch 1, | A mystical sort of poem. I liked it, keep writing :) *cosmo-queen* |
| Damaged 2003-07-14 ch 1, | Death is hard, you described it perfectly in this poem. I was a bit confused at first, but once you read it again, it all makes sense. Totally beautiful! Keep writing! |
| ColorCrayons 2003-07-09 ch 1, | this was very interesting and i agree that it turned out well. i like how you say "cry not, my dear forest-child" that just seems...cool. i dunno. anyway, this was good if short, which isnt a bad thing. ~color outside the lines~ |