|Reviews for Doing Chores Without Help|
| pointythings 9/2/04 . chapter 1
Believe me, I know the feeling. This happens to me all the time.
| Amelia Sandberg 7/15/04 . chapter 1
great rhyme and rhythm. know how you feel. my dad CANNOT clean.
| FireNeiko 6/21/04 . chapter 1
Life sux like that
Funn little Poem D
| Lil Sis 6/5/04 . chapter 1
That is wonderful I love reading your poems, Dan! And I love at the end of this one you used the moon bringing in the tide. You are the Best!
| The Rejection 5/26/04 . chapter 1
ha ha, I can relate.
My parents never shout at my brother for not doing chores, and he sometimes stay up in his room for days and does nothing. I mean, how does he get awaly with it? How?
Anyway, nice poem.
| Long Live the Losers 1/23/04 . chapter 1
I liked that! It was sweet and light and cute, and reminded me how frustrating I used to find it when I always had to do the dishes and all my brother had to do was take out the trash..
| Eternity's Secret 10/2/03 . chapter 1
Nice. Oh and bty, you can do whatever you want with any reviews I give you. K? C ya!
| Kylia Ravencraft 7/31/03 . chapter 1
Maybe I should show this to my husband...LOL
| bgpresto 7/25/03 . chapter 1
This is the beginning of a great career of writing. This person has much potential.
| Mime 7/24/03 . chapter 1
Yeah, I agree that it's very frustrating to do chores by yourself. I think the only reason I stick to mine is because of pride also. Great job!
| Rachel 7/20/03 . chapter 1
Nice story with interesting style. I just got confused about who the character is. I've gotta compliment you on your style, though.
| Zilg 7/9/03 . chapter 1
Nice. I get those feelings when doing chores myself.
| swift sky silver 7/9/03 . chapter 1
nice. this was very effective0)