Believe me, I know the feeling. This happens to me all the time.

great rhyme and rhythm. know how you feel. my dad CANNOT clean.

Life sux like that
Funn little Poem D

That is wonderful I love reading your poems, Dan! And I love at the end of this one you used the moon bringing in the tide. You are the Best!

ha ha, I can relate.
My parents never shout at my brother for not doing chores, and he sometimes stay up in his room for days and does nothing. I mean, how does he get awaly with it? How?
Anyway, nice poem.

I liked that! It was sweet and light and cute, and reminded me how frustrating I used to find it when I always had to do the dishes and all my brother had to do was take out the trash..

Nice. Oh and bty, you can do whatever you want with any reviews I give you. K? C ya!

Maybe I should show this to my husband...LOL

This is the beginning of a great career of writing. This person has much potential.

Yeah, I agree that it's very frustrating to do chores by yourself. I think the only reason I stick to mine is because of pride also. Great job!

Nice story with interesting style. I just got confused about who the character is. I've gotta compliment you on your style, though.

Nice. I get those feelings when doing chores myself.

nice. this was very effective0)