ive always wondered what is it called when a person has two differnt coloured eyes? anyways this is a wonderfuly, differrently written story.. i really love the way they all speak.. and the way the weather and colours are interacted with the emotions potrayed in chapters.. its so wonderful. id love for an update on this! keep up d gud work!! love and admiration Gretchen45 x plz review my story 'truly madly deeply' as itd mean alot to me..really.. tanx x

OMG Kels! TWO CHAPTERS AT ONCE! *stares in utter amazement* I never though the day would come for one chapter and now you have posted two. You astound me, oh and I guess this means I must begin my story again ^^; a promise is a promise. Well actually it was more of a deal...w/e anyway yay! good chapters, I like where you are going with this A LOT. Now if only you posted more often (I REALLY am not one to talk though). Anyway keep up the great work, this plot is looking fabulous!

Twiggy

My, this was certainly a pleasant surprise! I was so astonished when I saw two emails in my inbox with not just ONE chapter, but TWO! O_o; Good job, Kikyou-sama! Keep writing!

*falls out of chair and collapses* YOU ACTUALLY UPDATED! I thought this day would never come *sniffs* UPDATE REALLY SON PLEASE!I'll die if you keep up this pace for long
~twiggy

*patpat* Good, you finally updated this XD I want a dead oppossum on my head @.@; Did.. she eat the frog?
((Don't mind Becki. She had poppyseed muffins today, which explains her drugged behavior))
A bit short though.. *cough* Oh well, keep writing! :D
~Becki

Short but good ^.' Keep writing this it's one of my favorites on FP.com so far. *looks around* only 8 reviews, well nine now. Well your doing great ^^ *smack Kei* DOWN!...*sighs* if he didn't have good plot bunnies I'd delete him. Well keep it up and update soon, ja ne

~Twiggy~

Your story is soo good! Unlike the others, I really didn't notice that much of a lack in description, but mostly because it's just the begining, and eventually we will know all the people better. The scenes were described really well, though! I didn't review the first chapter? Thats weird, I thought I did! O well. Great Start, Update soon!

WRITE MORE OR I'LL FORCE BECKI TO TAKE ALL THINGS TO DO WITH EMYTH AWAY FROM YOU FOREVER...ehem *cough* now then wonderful story so far KelC, I agree with amanda, you should put in a few more physical descriptions. Personalities were well established though so you'd better write more. PD-day's next week ^^ I love late starts. ^.'

~Twiggy~

Phwee! Another great story! I wish i could write like you ;_; ooh, she's like inhuman oo; Great idea kels, just write more! I think this one is my favorite story so far ^^ (even if it is romance) I haven't found any errors in it, but when i do i'll be sure to alert you ^^

aww the poor count! this is a good start to the story, maybe in the next chapter you could explain more about the emalan. keep it up!

Its really good Kelsey, it reminds me of Les Miserbles (can't spell obviously) but not really... Sorta... Don't ask. I'm so serious the rp has changed the way your write. You do it more like an rp. A way to change that is be way more descriptive. Describe what the man looked like, the wife, the doctor. I think the only thing you described was the Counts black hair. But its quite possible you want to keep their appearances hidden. Like the mother I could understand but not the father and doctore. Whatever. When you update I want the url since I'm on ff.net not fp.net. And PotC (Yes PotC (Pirates of the Caribean (copy right me (for the PotC)) is so good. Orli tis hot... I'm soo happy he they left his shirt partically open. *drool* Johnny Depp is hot too! :-P

Great chapter, a little sad, but oh well. This story looks like it's got lots of potential. Keep up the good work and update soon!

i'm not much for romance, as you most likely know, but it's good

A good beginning.. you lost me a bit on the non-human part though. you might want to explain it a bit more.