Hey Great start!! This is really promising, but do you think its such a good idea to write this in a series of journal entries and newspaper articles? if thats what you want to do, thats cool, but a little bit of 'in body' stuff would be cool instead of just reporting on whats happened. thats just my two cents, this is COOL

I think It's great!! I love it!! Keep it coming!!

So far it seems really good, I'll be looking for more.

This sounds promising. Yeah, you're right, it does sound very Resi-like. But hey, like I care! :P
Just keep on going, I'll make sure to review it every time a new chapter is up. I am interested in the rest of the story!

Terrific! That's great so far! I would love to see more soon! Keep it up and good luck!