(I swear i'll try to space the reviews so you don't get too many from me all at once =P) yeah, i know what you are saying. you're right, almost all of us have experienced a broken heart, but i've never even thought about it like you seem to have done. you are an excellent poet, like i said you seem to have a certain style. My favorite part was when you likened the heart to the wine bottle, very good imagery throughout. I sadly can't think of anything bad to say, so i'll just shut up now ^^

I like how you compare the heart to a puzzle. Great job!