I really liked this. It reminds me of a book that I've been reading where the main character gets upset and almost homicidal when a telepath looks into their mind. Well-done! ;)

Wonderful...

I like this, I feel a lot like this after a breakup, you just keep thinking about that person and hope that they will just go away and leave you alone. It's kind of hard though, because they're just stuck in your head.

*wide eyed* do you hear voices too?... *crickets chirp* no? are you sure?... great poem...yeah evanescence has a way of being stuck in your head too huh?... frogs, violins, all cool... ^-^... ur profile was giddy with the reviews you have been getting so this is another one to add to ur list.. ^-^

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You know... this might not have been the purpose of writing the poem, but it kinda explains my feelings and frustrations towards the band 'Evanescense' completely... I was overjoyed to find such lyrical value just to find out that they turned their backs on the Christian music community... Now I can't get the lyrics out of my head.. I want it to go... hehe get the comparison?

Anyway, this is powerful and beautifully written... definitely going to my favourites list.

That's very moving. YOu can feel the power and emotion in this piece. Well done!

BTW, thanks for reviewing my work. :)

yeah music inspires me too . . .my case is japanese pop singer ayumi hamasaki.

anyway, I thought that in the beginning, you spent too much repeating the inquiry "why are you here" and "youre still here" etc (the idea, basically). I loved the rest.

Letting people in
Will only let them out.

brilliance :P