Excellent! Now that's a cool protagonist. Castrating himself, cutting himself after each kill, the guy's definitely hardcore as they come. All the hosts are so different, even Aruna and Jeffery prefer commanding and vigilianteism respectively. I can't wait to read more of this story!

OOh, brutal! Aruna's one tough girl, I'm beginning to like her. I also liked Paul as well, they both seem so different. I can't wait to see what happens with these two later.

Hmm, clever idea, introducing each chapter with a song. I like that! It really helps set a mood for each chapter, especially when you know the song yourself.

The Third Host? Sounds like the Third Child in Evangelion. From the songs, it seems like you're a metal fan.

This Aruna character is evil! Why does she kill her fellow man when Earth is under attack?

Aww... What a poor character...

Who's the First Host? What exactly are the Enemy? Come on! Give us more info!

Wow! Even an opening theme!

i dunno...i think that if aliens attacked, it would unify the human race because of a common enemy...

i dont think they would waste ammunition on other humans

but, good story but can you be a little more specific about the Enemy?

good concept. i know NGE song, but not this one, which might lessen the overall 'experience'.

myself: silverchair, jesus jones, bowie. mood music is always good to write and read to.

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