love it

tht was sad! u need to warn ppl icried a lot. i was hoping 4 a fluffy ending and igot this..now dont get me wrong this was a wonderful story but its incredibly sad. why didnt jess go see a counselor or something?you also saids he was unfeeling but there was a lotof feeling which i didnt get since she was numb..also why didnt her friends do something?? you also said tht love set the ppl free from the dark side of the moon why wasnt jess set free tht way she would have known if it was truelove? wouldnt someone have noticed this condition? i think its really hard to believe tht she would have gone all through life and no one would have noticed or done anything about it hetr brother noticed it why didnt he do something about it if this is as life traumitising as it sounds why didnt anything happen to make it go away? it was a really good story but some parts were hardto believe...dont pay attention to all my questions all tht much i was ranting b/c i really wanted jess and chase to get together and stay tht waywell tht and i was wondering why these things happened but anyway it was a really good story

Hey! Lat time, i really didn't read the whole story! But i just finished the rest! *glares* I have so much to say but just one question...WHY DIDN'T U BRING JESSICA AND CHASE TOGETHER?...lol sorry it kinda bothered me hehe BUT THAT WAS THE BEST STORY EVER gurl! And about my story...i found it erased this morning...complete with the poems :( I was so depressed when i saw what had happened :( I don't think i want to continue anymore...*sigh* but i still put up the first chapter of "The Curse" but im still debating with myself whether i should continue writing this story...Well, anyways, WONDERFUL STORY!! *applauds* If you want, i'll put my story back up...and i posted my seventh chapter up yesterday just to suffer depression this morning when i saw ALL my stories GONE! anyways see ya! GREAT STORY! I LOVED IT! [except for the horribly sad parts where i ended up running to the bathroom and crying my eyes out and the end was not happy!how could u do this? *sniffle*] but that was an awesome story still! :)
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Woohoo great story! That was awesome *clicks on favorites* =)
~~*Nid*~~

excellent writing style
i was interested the whole time...
seems to me kinda like she was
hm...
i dno
unaccepting of help? it seemed like chase was there to help and she just kinda threw him away

Beautiful. I loved it.

dark side of the moon is a great album. GO PINK FLOYD

oh my...things never work out the way you want them to. ah! very well written story, yes, the angst was strong, but it was sort of creepy... i don't know why. did jess ever get married? gosh, alana really should be murdered. stupid chase, tsk tsk tsk. i wish i could live their live and undo everything that went wrong, but i can't. Beautiful story...so sad, i think im going to go read a happy one now, ^_^.

never stop casting footprints
lynxkitty

ah! must..kill..alana...or is it all a hallucination? anyways, *stabs alana*

wow...sry for short reviews, but i'll have a nice fat review for u at the end

no! let..chase...go?? hm >_< eek. i like how you compare things, like the water and the oil, really poetic.

hmm...how cryptic.

i dont believe in true love...will u go to homecoming with me? haha, lil bit late, but then ago i asked u a long time ago b4 too.

I cried...I really cried at the end of the epilogue. You did an amazing job. I envy you. This story was well written and thought out. Thanks for all the memories. Love always, penster ~*~ Somewhere in the clouds ~*~

I say your last chapter was VERY powerful. I believe you did a VERY VERY good job on it. You are a very talented writer. I hope you get published someday. Anyways wonderful story. If I see any of your other stories that sound good I'll read them. Well great job and good luck with writing!