|Reviews for Do I Dare?|
| Jennacharm 5/9/04 . chapter 1
The mellow and yellow line is awkward. Same with the Orange.
But I like the end. It really uplifts the poem... cute:)
| these kids 11/10/03 . chapter 1
sounds like the true mind of a teenager. one who debates on whether to wear this or to dress like this and is always wondering what others might think of it. great emotion :)
(Thanks for the reviews)
| Wasted Postage 7/10/03 . chapter 1
Another interesting poem. You did a marvelous job. You always seem to find the most intriguing topics. I like it!