The mellow and yellow line is awkward. Same with the Orange.
But I like the end. It really uplifts the poem... cute:)

sounds like the true mind of a teenager. one who debates on whether to wear this or to dress like this and is always wondering what others might think of it. great emotion :)

these kids

(Thanks for the reviews)

Another interesting poem. You did a marvelous job. You always seem to find the most intriguing topics. I like it!

*AbunaiChikara