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Lady SkyWing 2003-07-14 . chapter 1
Good. You send a really great picture I can see the lady of the lake right now...I just might have to darw a picture, now there's an idea:)
Aisling Grey 2003-07-11 . chapter 1
Wonderful poem. I like the image you present in it. I love the line: Mist clouding her presence. There's only one line I would change. Instead of saying: Only worthy of heart and worthy of mind, you should change it to: Only worthy of heart and mind. It works better. Keep up the good work.
DefianceIsMe 2003-07-10 . chapter 1
It's a beautiful scene greated by equally beautiful words. GJ. ^_^
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