Beautiful. Very sweet, and emotional! Keep writing!

so true about...love. great poem. love the structure u used

I love it! I absolutely love it! http://deathchic.suddenlaunch.com can you check it out sometime? you can also post your poems there!

I liked your poem. Its not my favorite peice, but its good. I have a poem about how i feel about love (its a little diffrent). Please feel free to read it and tell me what you think.

this poem is really good and depressing at the same time. it has a really good flow and it shows your emotions very clearly. Well done 1=)