Reviews for Swallowed A Penny

WarlordJEREK 2008-04-13 ch 1,	abuseNevermind BILL saying it was cliche. Even if it's been written about before you had a great take on the whole needing to be different thing and I thought that the stream of conciousness prose was outstandingly well written. You're very good at this style so you should keep it up.
bill 2004-02-19 ch 1, anon.	abusehow about you write about a teenage girl who like totally is in love with her boyfriend but feels too pressured to have sex with him. Because I think that that would be less cliche than this piece.