hum it was werid but i liked it keep up with the good work XP

lol weird. I like it :) I think it's a nice as a one off, definately an interesting twist but eh, it's good. lovely concept but rare.

i really like this story, but it's been months, will you ever continue it?

OOh, yes! Write more! I like this idea. It's a fun story. Wish I could write as well as you *pout*

Dude...that makes me feel better about all of my alter-egos...it would be really cool if you continued ^^ Yeah ^^

!Magenta~

I would like to hear more, actually. I think that it's quite interesting so far. ^_^

*puffy chibi face* you better update this soon! i wanna know what happens to the red head!

hmm, thats odd. I liked it though. You should continue it.

interesting concept... i think i've read something like this once before...

I just hope.. everything will turn out fine for torey in the end... he might get hurt... somehow...it always happens that way...

its so.. sad to see bishies sad... so.. eermm... give him a happy ending? Heh~ but its entirely up to you... which ever way it goes.. i'm sure it will still be great to read.

WHOO! You have a brilliant mind. ^-^ C'mon, I want more! And I really want to get in touch. I'll jump you on AIM someday. ^-^

~ Moriah

i like this plot so far with Majic. i think he's going to be my favorit in this one ^_^ please write more soon! is something going to happen between Kei and Torey? what will happen to the wounderful Majic then? threesome? that Kei doesn't know he's in?

i like it i like it :D very interesting :D and just 'disturbed' enough to make it terribly cute ^^ if you feel like it, update when you can, cant wait :D

Gah! *glomps* Very, very good. I'm jealous now. I wish I could write like that, yes, I do.

I'm interested, so, I now forbid you to stop writing this story. Yes, I forbid you. I'll find a way to get to Australia and force you to write more if ya don't right now. ^^; Eh, probably not...but I'll...eh...invade your dreams! Yup, that's it. That's what I'll do.

Majic's very good. You need to write more about him, and Kei seems like he's certainly going to go much deeper into the story, ne? And if I'm wrong...don't let me know. That'll make me feel stupid, it will. ^^;

Hm...I wish I were schizophrenic. It sounds like much fun.

Ahh, this review isn't as long as some of my others...

Write more, I say. MORE! ^^;;

I was a bit confused at first, but it made sense at the end.

I'd love to see what you do with this, so please continue.

wow that sure caught my intrest