very nice chapter! can't wait to see what happens next! seer rocks! ^-^

Could you tell us exactly why they are being chased for starting a club? It seems a rather flimsy excuse to chase them. But, oh well. I really like this story and how you develop the characters so well!
BTW, is that a language that you made up, or is is already existing? Just wondering.

*jumps up and down in impatiance* I wanna read the rest of the story! Please update? PWEASE? *uses puppy dog eyes* I'll give you a cookie!

this is funny! you did well coming up with the characters. some of it is hard to understand, but it's a good story none the less. i can't wait to read the next chapter! good job!