I really liked your story. I can't wait for you to have the next scene up.

+purru+
I love reading play fics. This has an interesting theme, and I'd love to see where you end up going with it. ^^

Not sure where you're going with this, but I'd be interested to see.
I'm not sure I like the very beginning, where it's blatant introductions. Maybe if you can work that info into a more normal conversation between Liza and the Angel, it would be a more striking beginning...
It's been a while since I've read a play, so this should be fun. Please keep writing! Thanks! :)