this story is great and you totally made it obvious that it will be incest in later stories I love his older brother for brinning flowers to him at his parents funneral that was so sweet

Hi! You might want to change your rating to M instead of K . lol

I've never read an incest before, but this was really good so far! :) Are you going to write more?

i liked it so far.. please write more.

I love this story! I can't wait to read more!

^__^ You should continue this soon...

A very good start.

I like Arekku... I want to hug him when he cries! But you described him so thin... Would I break him? Teehee.

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Peach Mouse

So well this is my first incest story. However I'm writing one myself (with a friend actually, we've written it together, when one can't think of what to put next the other takes over. It's great for when you get authors block...)Anyway interesting introduction. Could use abit more construction on the characters and setting. I'm not even sure where this story takes place. Otherswise I found it intrigueing, we'll see what happens next.

Its a cute begining ^^ Write more soon~

will you ever update?

*sniffles, pokes story* Ever going to continue? I would love for it to.

:] YES! Great story! I love this story! I only found a few errors. You format.. there's like.. almost no angst.
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I don't think you understand how happy this makes me. [heart]ing on you.

Well...this should b interesting. Update soon. Its so cute and real. I mean the reactions r so...true. I really like. Update!

Oh, come on, don't leave it at that! Seriously, this is the third review I've ever written for a fictionpress story because I only do it for ones that impress me, and then the people I review for have stories that haven't been updated! Please continue! Please!

I can't find the fic... *runs way crying*
OH! A PLUSHIE! FOR ME?! THANK YOU! ^o^ *smiles and suckes her charmbracelet. "mommy says to not suck my tumb coz the dentist says it." she never mentioned boys... gheghe*
now the real review: this is great, I'm so happy I saw your add! ^o^ I def liked it! write further soon or I'll kill you... *threatening silence* ^o^ or maybe I won't coz then you def can't write further. oh well...
now the usefull info: uhm... *thinks* ... *stays silent*

Nice job, and a good story you've got going there.
Write more please!